tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4853732651436355622.post8896272714450581298..comments2010-04-28T05:20:20.095-07:00Comments on Reading: Secret Santa - October 12, 2009180170http://www.blogger.com/profile/13955682192199488093noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4853732651436355622.post-8726001998174063822009-10-13T15:55:25.234-07:002009-10-13T15:55:25.234-07:00A great journal entry. Your are clear with your c...A great journal entry. Your are clear with your conclusions and detailed with most of your examples. Your example of a connection was a bit vague. Remember we make connections to help us better understand the story, characters or plot. I do like the suggestions you make to change the story and make it more interesting.H.Dawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15402249382333338999noreply@blogger.com